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title: "Edit and Improve"
url: "https://st-marys-ce-primary-school.schudio.com/blog/2024-05-17-14-00-45-edit-and-improve"
school: "St Mary's C.E. Primary School"
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# Edit and Improve

  ![Image of Edit and Improve ](https://files.schudio.com/st-marys-ce-primary-school/images/blog/7B4BCDC2-5A14-4D7C-8B12-57D79B80A8E4.jpeg)  17 May 2024   [MrsStretton](https://st-marys-ce-primary-school.schudio.com/blog/author/MrsStretton)   [Class 2](https://st-marys-ce-primary-school.schudio.com/blog/category/class-2)

This week in English we have been writing non chronological reports about penguins. Today Year 2 worked in pairs to peer assess each other’s work. They then chose a section of their work to edit and improve, adding sentence openers and generalisers to make their writing even better!

 [ Painting ](https://st-marys-ce-primary-school.schudio.com/blog/2024-05-17-13-57-10-painting) [Descriptions of the witch ](https://st-marys-ce-primary-school.schudio.com/blog/2024-06-04-11-39-42-descriptions-of-the-witch)

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